Our Love Never Existed...

This artwork was made by my friend BananaRamaDraws on DeviantArt. The link is here: http://bananaramadraws.deviantart.com/art/Our-Love-Never-Existed-526191992

I like this! I love the design of Cragfoot (I think that's the striped cat's name). I also like the story behind this. It gave me the feels in the description:

Stop crying Blotchedheart, we never showed any love to each other we would never fall in love... but why am I sad? I can't stop thinking of them... they will be mates. I'll always be a friend, nothing more... nothing..

AHHH THE FEELS!!!!

Now, the tears are fine, but keep in mind that tears aren't actually blue. They are transparent, and you used DA Muro to make this. The closest thing to transparent is silver, so try using silver next time.

Also, Blotchedheart's head looks a bit like an oval. Try making it rounder and add some fur around the head, like in my art. The cats in the memory are fine, but add some fur around the head. Also, maybe you should try adding a snout. The ears should be a bit rounder, but not too round.

Otherwise, you're getting better and I can't wait to see improvement!